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should absolutely make the time to hear their singers.
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- Eqidri, Eril Village
- Eqidri, Eril Village


The world was young and the skies were bright with sun
The world was young and the skies were bright with sun
And Nariel ranged beneath the spreading trees
And Nariel ranged beneath the spreading trees
Her wit was sharp, her arrows swift, her step was
Her wit was sharp, her arrows swift, her step was
ever-sure and true
ever-sure and true
Now Elar the Mother grew much concerned for
Now Elar the Mother grew much concerned for
Her daughter dared places even she knew not
Her daughter dared places even she knew not
But a child leaves in order to grow so she
But a child leaves in order to grow so she
tended home alone
tended home alone
In her garden the ethron grew strong and green
In her garden the ethron grew strong and green
Under the Mother's care. Her water was love,
Under the Mother's care. Her water was love,
Her food was the sun, her soil her gentle arms:
Her food was the sun, her soil her gentle arms
thus her ethron bloomed
thus her ethron bloomed
Some chased Nariel 'cross the forest and
Some chased Nariel 'cross the forest and
She taught them secrets her mother would not share:
She taught them secrets her mother would not share:
To stalk a deer in silence, to sing with birds,
To stalk a deer in silence, to sing with birds,
string an ashwood bow
string an ashwood bow


In silence did Lielqan dwell, beneath the
In silence did Lielqan dwell, beneath the
Sunset sea. No ethron sought her words or
Sunset sea. No ethron sought her words or
Sang songs in her name. She knew this and did
Sang songs in her name. She knew this and did
not sorrow, and yet--
not sorrow, and yet--
No one is pleased to abide alone. She sang
No one is pleased to abide alone. She sang
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Beginnings and of ends. Thus she leaves her seas
Beginnings and of ends. Thus she leaves her seas
And ventures onto shore. The ethron feared her
And ventures onto shore. The ethron feared her
summons dire, but--
summons dire, but--
She took them into her arms and held them close
She took them into her arms and held them close
She sang them songs as they died and shed no tears
She sang them songs as they died and shed no tears
While Elar watched and sorrowed for her children's ends
While Elar watched and sorrowed for her children's ends
Lielqan left them.
Lielqan left them.


One day it happened that Nariel saw her come
One day it happened that Nariel saw her come
And walk amongst the ethron who loved her not:
And walk amongst the ethron who loved her not:
Lielqan stopped and lifted a sickly girl
Lielqan stopped and lifted a sickly girl
while Elar stood by
while Elar stood by
Now Lielqan took the girl away with her
Now Lielqan took the girl away with her
Without a glance behind her, forward to her
Without a glance behind her, forward to her
Watery home. Around her the ethron sorrowed and
Watery home. Around her the ethron sorrowed and
Nariel called out:
Nariel called out:
"Why do you do this, ven'rable grandmother?
"Why do you do this, ven'rable grandmother?
Return that girl to her home. Her mother loves
Return that girl to her home. Her mother loves
Her and her sisters weep. Do not steal away
Her and her sisters weep. Do not steal away
that fam'ly's dear child!"
that fam'ly's dear child!"
So Lielqan stopped but did not turn around
So Lielqan stopped but did not turn around
She looked instead to Elar, who fell silent
She looked instead to Elar, who fell silent
at this call. "She has been remiss," said Sunset's
at this call. "She has been remiss," said Sunset's
living hand, and turned.
living hand, and turned.


"This is a thing which you all should know: there is a dragon in the Void,"
"This is a thing which you all should know: there is a dragon in the Void,"
she sang in the voice of whales. The sun now set around them.
she sang in the voice of whales. The sun now set around them.
"Because It sleeps I may stand in a place between this life and the end.
"Because It sleeps I may stand in a place between this life and the end.
I take her because I must. Without me, the Dragon reigns."
I take her because I must. Without me, the Dragon reigns."


Lielqan left, the girl carried in her arms.
Lielqan left, the girl carried in her arms.
Nariel remained, disturbed. She looked to her
Nariel remained, disturbed. She looked to her
Mother and asked, "Does she speak the truth? Is there
Mother and asked, "Does she speak the truth? Is there
this dragon lurking?"
this dragon lurking?"
Elar did not answer, so Nariel knew
Elar did not answer, so Nariel knew
It for true. She turned away and went apart
It for true. She turned away and went apart
And the stars fled the skies for three days with her:
And the stars fled the skies for three days with her:
alone she brooded
alone she brooded
When Nariel emerged, she took up her bow
When Nariel emerged, she took up her bow
and her sword and a necklace wrought with starlight
and her sword and a necklace wrought with starlight
and she kissed her mother good-bye. And she said:
and she kissed her mother good-bye. And she said:
"I'll go to the Void."
"I'll go to the Void."
"I fear no death, and I fear no dragon's call.
"I fear no death, and I fear no dragon's call.
I will steal this death that troubles us all, and
I will steal this death that troubles us all, and
take it from this world. I go; fear not for me."
take it from this world. I go; fear not for me."
Thus the maiden left.
Thus the maiden left.


Elar did grow much afraid, for she knew what
Elar did grow much afraid, for she knew what
dangers the Void did hold, and what power the
dangers the Void did hold, and what power the
Dragon did bear. For her childrens' safety she
Dragon did bear. For her childrens' safety she
told them not, but now--
told them not, but now--
Now she took to the skies and sought Kyana of
Now she took to the skies and sought Kyana of
the stars. "Beloved," she said, "our daughter runs
the stars. "Beloved," she said, "our daughter runs
into the greatest of peril. She seeks the
into the greatest of peril. She seeks the
great Dragon to rip
great Dragon to rip
Death itself from Its jaws. Cold Lielqan told
Death itself from Its jaws. Cold Lielqan told
Her of Its 'gift'. I fear Nariel will not
Her of Its 'gift'. I fear Nariel will not
Return from her dread errand. I've no power
Return from her dread errand. I've no power
'gainst it. I beg you,
'gainst it. I beg you,
Sweet Kyana. Can you call her back? I fear my
Sweet Kyana. Can you call her back? I fear my
Heart will break without her by my side. You might
Heart will break without her by my side. You might
Yet be able to reach our dearest daughter.
Yet be able to reach our dearest daughter.
love, you must be able."
love, you must be able."


Kyana fell silent, and turned her from the
Kyana fell silent, and turned her from the
Stars. She said at last, "I have no more power
Stars. She said at last, "I have no more power
over death than you. Nariel is headstrong
over death than you. Nariel is headstrong
and will not heed words.
and will not heed words.
Not yours, not mine, and you know this too. But do
Not yours, not mine, and you know this too. But do
Not despair, my dearest. There may yet be a
Not despair, my dearest. There may yet be a
Way to draw her back. You will not care for it.
Way to draw her back. You will not care for it.
but my sister is
but my sister is
Not so cruel as you name her. Lielqan has
Not so cruel as you name her. Lielqan has
Some power to stand in the face of death. She
Some power to stand in the face of death. She
would go if you asked it of her, for it is
would go if you asked it of her, for it is
not Nariel's time.
not Nariel's time.


She does not say such things for the sake of harm.
She does not say such things for the sake of harm.
A painful truth might be what is needed to
A painful truth might be what is needed to
Grow: a forest fire for the soul. I take no
Grow: a forest fire for the soul. I take no
joy in it, yet still..."
joy in it, yet still..."


Elar knew to hear it what cost it was to
Elar knew to hear it what cost it was to
Say, for Kyana feels all pain as her own and
Say, for Kyana feels all pain as her own and
Sorrows every cut. Elar could not bear to
Sorrows every cut. Elar could not bear to
add to it, but had
add to it, but had
Done all the same. She kissed the tears from Kyana's
Done all the same. She kissed the tears from Kyana's
Cheeks and said, "Then your sister Lielqan it
Cheeks and said, "Then your sister Lielqan it
Must be. I will bid her go and return our
Must be. I will bid her go and return our
daughter to our home."
daughter to our home."


And Elar left the night behind and wove her
And Elar left the night behind and wove her
Way past the dawn. She chased the sun through the
Way past the dawn. She chased the sun through the
day until its time was done. There at sunset,
day until its time was done. There at sunset,
Lielqan waited.
Lielqan waited.
"Your forgiveness I must beg," said Elar
"Your forgiveness I must beg," said Elar
to the witch of the sunset sea. "I must beg
to the witch of the sunset sea. "I must beg
a favour of you: fetch Nariel from the
a favour of you: fetch Nariel from the
dark and endless Void."
dark and endless Void."


Lielqan merely watched in silence as Elar approached her from the day;
Lielqan merely watched in silence as Elar approached her from the day;
she was not unmoved, but she well knew the cost of what was
she was not unmoved, but she well knew the cost of what was
Asked. The Void welcomes no one; it wreaks the end of all. To go there is to invite
Asked. The Void welcomes no one; it wreaks the end of all. To go there is to invite
doom upon yourself and all that you love. But that itself
doom upon yourself and all that you love. But that itself
Is reason enough to enter at greatest need. Nariel cannot hope
Is reason enough to enter at greatest need. Nariel cannot hope
to face this foe; not here and not now. She is quick and brave
to face this foe; not here and not now. She is quick and brave
And daring but death comes to all things. Lielqan spoke at last, her whale's voice
And daring but death comes to all things. Lielqan spoke at last, her whale's voice
an endless winding song. "I will go in to the Void for you,
an endless winding song. "I will go in to the Void for you,
For her, for all your children who yet endure. If Nariel still lives, I
For her, for all your children who yet endure. If Nariel still lives, I
will bring her back to you. Dawn still returns after darkest night."
will bring her back to you. Dawn still returns after darkest night."


So Lielqan prepared herself not for war
So Lielqan prepared herself not for war
But for stealth, and it is no mean thing to hide
But for stealth, and it is no mean thing to hide
The very sun's light. But clouds her cloak drew 'cross
The very sun's light. But clouds her cloak drew 'cross
the sky, and rain fell
the sky, and rain fell
Veiled, she went into the Void. Now Nariel
Veiled, she went into the Void. Now Nariel
Is trackless, and leaves no trace behind. But the
Is trackless, and leaves no trace behind. But the
Necklace she brought to light her way is indeed
Necklace she brought to light her way is indeed
akin to the sun
akin to the sun


Lielqan could feel, as none else could, the warmth
Lielqan could feel, as none else could, the warmth
of forgotten stars. Their light was gone, their scent
of forgotten stars. Their light was gone, their scent
was dead, but Lielqan knew her sister's tears.
was dead, but Lielqan knew her sister's tears.
the stars' memory
the stars' memory


Was her guide. But after a time even the
Was her guide. But after a time even the
Starlight died, and Lielqan found herself in
Starlight died, and Lielqan found herself in
darkest Void. There were no arrows, no steel hiss.
darkest Void. There were no arrows, no steel hiss.
perhaps Nariel--
perhaps Nariel--


But far away Lielqan heard a lone voice
But far away Lielqan heard a lone voice
Raised in fading song. Lielqan set after
Raised in fading song. Lielqan set after
It, for only one would be so bold as to
It, for only one would be so bold as to
sing out in this place
sing out in this place
She trekked forever, chasing that foolish voice:
She trekked forever, chasing that foolish voice:
For if it woke the dragon, it would be the
For if it woke the dragon, it would be the
Song of the whole world's end. But Nariel was
Song of the whole world's end. But Nariel was
a huntress and she
a huntress and she
Moved faster than the aging sun. Only that she
Moved faster than the aging sun. Only that she
Did not truly know what she sought kept Sunset
Did not truly know what she sought kept Sunset
On her trail. Desperately Lielqan pursued
On her trail. Desperately Lielqan pursued
her, chasing that song.
her, chasing that song.
When exhaustion nearly claimed her, Lielqan
When exhaustion nearly claimed her, Lielqan
Finally found a camp, made out from the lonely
Finally found a camp, made out from the lonely
Void. There, at last, Lielqan found Nariel,
Void. There, at last, Lielqan found Nariel,
amidst endless night.
amidst endless night.


Now Nariel grew angry, for she would not
Now Nariel grew angry, for she would not
be dissuaded. Her cause was righteous and she
be dissuaded. Her cause was righteous and she
would not have Lielqan somehow protect death.
would not have Lielqan somehow protect death.
she opened her mouth
she opened her mouth
And Lielqan spoke words to her which never
And Lielqan spoke words to her which never
have been revealed: neither she nor Nariel
have been revealed: neither she nor Nariel
have ever said what happened between them there
have ever said what happened between them there
but Lielqan led
but Lielqan led
Nariel by the hand: reluctant, angry
Nariel by the hand: reluctant, angry
Still, but together they traveled from that dark
Still, but together they traveled from that dark
And endless plane. Lielqan took off her cloak
And endless plane. Lielqan took off her cloak
and Nariel her
and Nariel her


Sword and her bow. The stars her necklace had
Sword and her bow. The stars her necklace had
Since dimmed, but brightened in the noonday sun. But
Since dimmed, but brightened in the noonday sun. But
They parted when they emerged, and said no words.
They parted when they emerged, and said no words.
some rifts do not heal.
some rifts do not heal.


Lielqan took no offense, for she is not loved. Why should she expect
Lielqan took no offense, for she is not loved. Why should she expect
thanks for so thwarting such a scheme? But she returns those whose time
thanks for so thwarting such a scheme? But she returns those whose time
Is yet to come. She needs no love, she needs no thanks for she always gets her
Is yet to come. She needs no love, she needs no thanks for she always gets her
due. The sun rises; the sun sets. Lielqan remains for all.
due. The sun rises; the sun sets. Lielqan remains for all.





Revision as of 22:23, 13 January 2025

Nariel is the ethron goddess of the hunt. Her document is yet to be written.

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                  A Myth of Lielqan and Nariel
              as transcribed by Eqidri of the Qali

This myth-song is of a form sung by the Leqari clan who dwells beneath the Sea of Lidreau, and has several interesting differences between versions sung by the Qali or Eqiril. I have done my best to transcribe the music they set it to as well, but as most of their instruments work best underwater, this is at best an approximation. Anyone who can find their way to meet with the Leqari should absolutely make the time to hear their singers.

- Eqidri, Eril Village

The world was young and the skies were bright with sun And Nariel ranged beneath the spreading trees Her wit was sharp, her arrows swift, her step was ever-sure and true

Now Elar the Mother grew much concerned for Her daughter dared places even she knew not But a child leaves in order to grow so she tended home alone

In her garden the ethron grew strong and green Under the Mother's care. Her water was love, Her food was the sun, her soil her gentle arms thus her ethron bloomed

Some chased Nariel 'cross the forest and She taught them secrets her mother would not share: To stalk a deer in silence, to sing with birds, string an ashwood bow

In silence did Lielqan dwell, beneath the Sunset sea. No ethron sought her words or Sang songs in her name. She knew this and did not sorrow, and yet--

No one is pleased to abide alone. She sang To the coral and taught whales to breathe the air But sharks she loved best of all: for they do not

 end but by their will
 

But Lielqan's touch is needed at times of Beginnings and of ends. Thus she leaves her seas And ventures onto shore. The ethron feared her summons dire, but--

She took them into her arms and held them close She sang them songs as they died and shed no tears While Elar watched and sorrowed for her children's ends Lielqan left them.

One day it happened that Nariel saw her come And walk amongst the ethron who loved her not: Lielqan stopped and lifted a sickly girl while Elar stood by

Now Lielqan took the girl away with her Without a glance behind her, forward to her Watery home. Around her the ethron sorrowed and Nariel called out:

"Why do you do this, ven'rable grandmother? Return that girl to her home. Her mother loves Her and her sisters weep. Do not steal away that fam'ly's dear child!"

So Lielqan stopped but did not turn around She looked instead to Elar, who fell silent at this call. "She has been remiss," said Sunset's living hand, and turned.

"This is a thing which you all should know: there is a dragon in the Void," she sang in the voice of whales. The sun now set around them.

"Because It sleeps I may stand in a place between this life and the end. I take her because I must. Without me, the Dragon reigns."

Lielqan left, the girl carried in her arms. Nariel remained, disturbed. She looked to her Mother and asked, "Does she speak the truth? Is there this dragon lurking?"

Elar did not answer, so Nariel knew It for true. She turned away and went apart And the stars fled the skies for three days with her: alone she brooded

When Nariel emerged, she took up her bow and her sword and a necklace wrought with starlight and she kissed her mother good-bye. And she said: "I'll go to the Void."

"I fear no death, and I fear no dragon's call. I will steal this death that troubles us all, and take it from this world. I go; fear not for me." Thus the maiden left.

Elar did grow much afraid, for she knew what dangers the Void did hold, and what power the Dragon did bear. For her childrens' safety she told them not, but now--

Now she took to the skies and sought Kyana of the stars. "Beloved," she said, "our daughter runs into the greatest of peril. She seeks the great Dragon to rip

Death itself from Its jaws. Cold Lielqan told Her of Its 'gift'. I fear Nariel will not Return from her dread errand. I've no power 'gainst it. I beg you,

Sweet Kyana. Can you call her back? I fear my Heart will break without her by my side. You might Yet be able to reach our dearest daughter. love, you must be able."

Kyana fell silent, and turned her from the Stars. She said at last, "I have no more power over death than you. Nariel is headstrong and will not heed words.

Not yours, not mine, and you know this too. But do Not despair, my dearest. There may yet be a Way to draw her back. You will not care for it. but my sister is

Not so cruel as you name her. Lielqan has Some power to stand in the face of death. She would go if you asked it of her, for it is not Nariel's time.

She does not say such things for the sake of harm. A painful truth might be what is needed to Grow: a forest fire for the soul. I take no joy in it, yet still..."

Elar knew to hear it what cost it was to Say, for Kyana feels all pain as her own and Sorrows every cut. Elar could not bear to add to it, but had

Done all the same. She kissed the tears from Kyana's Cheeks and said, "Then your sister Lielqan it Must be. I will bid her go and return our daughter to our home."

And Elar left the night behind and wove her Way past the dawn. She chased the sun through the day until its time was done. There at sunset, Lielqan waited.

"Your forgiveness I must beg," said Elar to the witch of the sunset sea. "I must beg a favour of you: fetch Nariel from the dark and endless Void."

Lielqan merely watched in silence as Elar approached her from the day; she was not unmoved, but she well knew the cost of what was

Asked. The Void welcomes no one; it wreaks the end of all. To go there is to invite doom upon yourself and all that you love. But that itself

Is reason enough to enter at greatest need. Nariel cannot hope to face this foe; not here and not now. She is quick and brave

And daring but death comes to all things. Lielqan spoke at last, her whale's voice an endless winding song. "I will go in to the Void for you,

For her, for all your children who yet endure. If Nariel still lives, I will bring her back to you. Dawn still returns after darkest night."

So Lielqan prepared herself not for war But for stealth, and it is no mean thing to hide The very sun's light. But clouds her cloak drew 'cross the sky, and rain fell

Veiled, she went into the Void. Now Nariel Is trackless, and leaves no trace behind. But the Necklace she brought to light her way is indeed akin to the sun

Lielqan could feel, as none else could, the warmth of forgotten stars. Their light was gone, their scent was dead, but Lielqan knew her sister's tears. the stars' memory

Was her guide. But after a time even the Starlight died, and Lielqan found herself in darkest Void. There were no arrows, no steel hiss. perhaps Nariel--

But far away Lielqan heard a lone voice Raised in fading song. Lielqan set after It, for only one would be so bold as to sing out in this place

She trekked forever, chasing that foolish voice: For if it woke the dragon, it would be the Song of the whole world's end. But Nariel was a huntress and she

Moved faster than the aging sun. Only that she Did not truly know what she sought kept Sunset On her trail. Desperately Lielqan pursued her, chasing that song.

When exhaustion nearly claimed her, Lielqan Finally found a camp, made out from the lonely Void. There, at last, Lielqan found Nariel, amidst endless night.

Now Nariel grew angry, for she would not be dissuaded. Her cause was righteous and she would not have Lielqan somehow protect death. she opened her mouth

And Lielqan spoke words to her which never have been revealed: neither she nor Nariel have ever said what happened between them there but Lielqan led

Nariel by the hand: reluctant, angry Still, but together they traveled from that dark And endless plane. Lielqan took off her cloak and Nariel her

Sword and her bow. The stars her necklace had Since dimmed, but brightened in the noonday sun. But They parted when they emerged, and said no words. some rifts do not heal.

Lielqan took no offense, for she is not loved. Why should she expect thanks for so thwarting such a scheme? But she returns those whose time

Is yet to come. She needs no love, she needs no thanks for she always gets her due. The sun rises; the sun sets. Lielqan remains for all.